50-Word Tales #112

Romantic painting

He had to see her again.

He procured daffodils and sweets and went to her house and knocked at her door.

A stranger opened, and he was naked from the waist up.

He dropped the flowers and the sweets and fainted.

‘Call the ambulance!’ the stranger cried. ‘Quick sister quick!’

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26 thoughts on “50-Word Tales #112

    1. I understand what you’re saying.

      But ‘and’ links things up and helps with the flow, I would say. Using segregated sentences makes everything a bit clumsy. I don’t always overuse ‘and’ though. Check my previous stories. 😉

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