John loved Marie, but she loved Jon. To Marie’s sorrow, Jon loved Maria, who did not love anyone. John wooed Marie while she wooed Jon. Meanwhile, Jon secretly wooed Maria.
One day, Maria saw for the first time John. She fell madly in love with him, and began wooing him.
This week I’m republishing some of my favorite 50-word stories.
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I write as a way of life: books, blogs, articles, almost-poems. I'm a freelancer, a vegetarian, and I listen to Leonard Cohen and enjoy French films. We are dying a little more with each new day we live, so shouldn't we make the most of our time?
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Goodness…that is a tongue twister of a story. 😀 Nicely done.
That was the purpose Caitlin, to twist your tongue. I’m glad it worked.
By the way, I’ve read a while ago this poem of yours with the wind and the sky. I liked it! I will read it again as soon as I can. 🙂
Well thanks Mr. Mars. 😀 Love your posts too.
No Mr. Mars Ms. Lambert, although I do wear a hat and consider myself a gentleman. We are of the same age I think. 😀
lol. I was just being funny by calling you Mr. Mars. hehe… :p
I know. 🙂
Lots of Jons/Johns and a whole bunch of wooing.
What was wrong with Jon with no H?
This Maria seems fickle.
I need more coffee haha I mean to keep track of these folks! Funny, you put a smile on my face, thanks HatBoy.
I guess I can say I STILL like that one.
its irony, but still we are smiling